Poem - 10 December 2018, 13:51

Weak

Weak

Sometimes fall hard.
comments not heard.
sensitive enthusiasm,
crash trust.

weak through life.
easy to manipulate.
emotions unsure.
less responsive attraction.

mind cant go on.
feelings no longer processed.
crumbling conviction,
cause no longer conscious.

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Ella11 December 2018, 13:19

Thanks so much!!

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Nine Eleven12 December 2018, 15:40

Be strong,

rage against the dying of the light.

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Ella13 December 2018, 06:56

Thanks!!!

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FRANTIC FREE-VERSER13 December 2018, 14:03

A delicious play on words methinks.

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Ella13 December 2018, 14:19

thanks

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Ella14 December 2018, 07:13

thanks so much Charlotte!

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kayla.renee14 December 2018, 07:20

Very good poem! You must have put a lot of work into this!!

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Ella14 December 2018, 07:21

Aw! thanks Kayla!

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