Wedding Vow
In the midst of the banal, of ordinary life
A gift was given to aid my strife
Moulded by gods, bestowed from above
An offering of you, an embodiment of love
A love with no gender, no age, no race
A love which transcends the malignancy of hate
For without you no flowers would bloom
No being from my earth, no light from it's moon
No morning of melodies from seraphs or birds
My heart without beats, my mouth without words
But in all the matter in all the universe
Its you who I’ve chosen in you I’ll immerse
And my darling from today, we'll never have to part
We're bounded by gold, entwined by our hearts
I will love you with vehemence, with pride and vigour
My husband, I vow, I will love you forever.
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Welcome to Cosmofunnel !
On your first day contributing to this site you have shown how much you can give others through your poetry. These are well structured, well thought through pieces designed to engage and stimulate the reader. Lovely work.
Best wishes to you ! Â :)
What a beautiful message to receive.Â
Thank you Richard, for your kind words and that extra bit of courage in which you've gifted me with.
Have a wonderful day.
Tania :-) x
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Hope your day is everything you wish for.
x
Hi  Tania I love this write i read it earlier
A great topic your love to your husband. Will relate to many
as you say "A love with no gender, no age, no race "
beautiful phrasing and flow True love for sureÂ
A pleasure to read welcome to CosmoÂ
Best wishes DebsÂ
Thank you, Debs.
Glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your kind words.
Have a wonderful weekend.
Tania xx
One of the beauties about reading poetry for me... Is feeling the writers emotional state.. The choice of words, and the picture been painted. For any of these characteristics I will cast my vote .. You Tonia, beautifully expressed the love of two people.. Picture well painted.. A handful of stars my friend.. Take care..
Thank you, WIlford.
You're kindness has made my day. Much love to you.
Tania x