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Well Done

                                                                           I don’t want to be a cliché
                                                                                         or dance
                                                                            with shadow children on
                                                                                  distant balconies ..
                                                                           That’s not what balconies
                                                                                  are for now, is it ..
                                                                          I want to sit and watch you
                                                                                   read your kindle ..
                                                                           While the sun goes down
                                                                               and we both blister ..
                                                                          Before that is, we each turn,
                                                                                    golden brown ..

 

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Lorna

Hi Neville, this made me smile as I started imagining all sorts of balcony antics 
but yes, sitting reading the kindle in the sun is exactly what balconies are for 
love this
Lorna 
Xx

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Neville

thanks Lorna, I'm glad that I am not the only one who has enjoyed a few balcony antics in the sun xx

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Linda Lank

VERY INTERESTING POETRY WELL WRITTEN LINDA

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Neville

THANKS LINDA .. Neville 

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Marion

Perfect companionship when no words or anything else is needed, that most perfect and privileged state of being ...hugs x

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Neville

So bloomin glad you felt it my way .. ta a million M xx 

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