SEX WET
“You feel so damned good”
Your voice penetrates me.
My body hears the call
As you suck the pulse beat
Through my skin and
Moan desire into every
Nerve and quivering muscle.
“Keep it right there baby”
Those love suggestions
I obey as I ride each wave.
Hard body pressing me
Into position, your legs
Outside of mine closing
My thighs tight around
Your deep stroke, thick
With my wet identity
You soul kiss that sweet spot
Over and over again
And I get a little bit closer;
It’s a smooth wet groove
In the dark with you
Do me front and back
Make it pleasure-pain good
As my core climbs the rock
And tightens its massaging grip.
I know how you want it
Wide and shoulder high…
As you tease me with the head
Withholding my release.
“Show me the honey”
You withdraw quickly,
Drape my legs over your shoulders
And tongue my clit;
Lick, suck, lick, suck, lick…
I can feel my bones melting
My skin tingling…
“Come back inside baby”
Then entering me again
Sheathing you like a second skin
You pump me hammer hard.
Taking my scream into your mouth
My tongue tangles with yours;
I taste us both… sex wet sweet.
“Come for me”
Back and forth and deeper down
Working the middle, side to side
In long rhythmic strokes
A tandem heat climbing high
Taking us both soaring toward release!
Then that inside sensual friction
Explodes into a constant pulse of fire!
My muscles clench hard and I
Feel your seed hit my womb
Over and over and again!
Our delirium takes us
Into the burn then propels
Us into the aftershocks
Of endless possibility!
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Comments
Hi Valerie, I liked your erotic poem and the video expressed the poem perfectly. Great job!
Hey Kiesha!  Thank's so much…I'm glad you enjoyed this poem!
val
ooh val x i need some of that lol x
Hey Tracy!  Glad you like this one.  Just trying to be entertaining! :)  More to come….(no pun intended)!
val
wow val you certainly got it altogether in this one ,erotic,hard-hitting ,very interesting lol piece !! Â video and poem pieced with each other brilliant . tina x
Tina! Â Thank you! I've been writing erotica ever since I read Henry Miller and Anais Nin and a few others when I took a literature class on the subject in college. Â
val
Fabulous..I was totally soaked by your poem Val :) massive thumbs up!
Hey Carey! Â Glad you really, really, really liked this write! :)
val
feels weird commenting on a erotic poem because as a man it implies I have a erection but I don't (or do I)
but this was an amazing poem, I had to look over my back as I read it for fear of passerby people noticing I was reading a erotic story lol
Hi Tim… well actually this poem should stir you a little bit.  I'm glad you took the time to read it…even with the risk involved!!!  Thanks!
val
after I wrote the comment I was like ooohhh that might of been in bad taste
Tim…no it wasn't.  I can understand not wanting someone reading over your shoulder while you're reading something sexy.  Again…I am glad you enjoyed the poem no matter where you read it!!!
val
Wow! Just Wow!
Hey Terrill! Â I'm gonna take your "wow" as you enjoyed this write of mine. Â
Val
Definately!
going for most commented on post in cosmofunnel history again great story
Tim! Â Glad you enjoyed this poem!
val
Valerie oh Valerie, I echo Tim's comments! LOL WOWSERS!!!!!!!!
Jack! Â Hi! Glad you had a chance to read this little hot piece! Thank you for your "dowsers"!!!!
val
Damn Val I thought i was following you then just realized I wasn't lol ...well on paper anyways...been following you babes your poems are amazing! Votes all round...good luck hun x
Hey Cary! Â Thanks! Â I'm glad you like this one! Â Just letting my muse lead me! Â lol
val
Listen to your muse babes..they taking you to te right places :) x
Wow Val! Where to start? first...let me get some ice water. Now, this is erotica at its highest level in literary form. Love this poem! Definitely had to give it 3 strong reads before responding. Every detailed description just gets hotter and hotter as you bring the scene along with insane passion while painting vivid pictures. Definitely 5 star material if I can figure out how to work this thing. I am now officially set for tonight's festivities! lol...thanks for the boost! Outstanding write!
Hi Daryl!  Thank you so much for your wonderful comments.  I am glad that you enjoyed this write and very glad that you had to read it 3 times.  I am sure that you'll have to read my next write 4 times at least! lol.  Whenever you want to rate a fellow poet just go to the "RATING" section directly under the poem and click on each star…the system will tell you how many stars that it registered (sometimes you have to do it over so it will take) and give the poet a vote.
Again thanks for reading my work!
val
Very hot! I almost felt like I had to make sure no one was watching me read this lol I really enjoyed this! A good write to get one in the mood. :)
Hi Felicia!  Thank you! Nothing wrong with reading erotica anywhere but I now what you mean… however, if you're with someone one special it should definitely help your mood! :) Â
val