What a blue day is today

Hi Maria, this is a gorgeous write, everything poetry aspires to be, you have great imagery here, in thought as well as presentation, and the dreamy quality of it is heightening to the senses, I've never read anything of yours before......but this is excellent work......well done my friend,,,,,tony   xxx

Picturesque scene, beautiful object selected to enhance beauty of the verse...echoing the following lines throughout the theme-

"There are butterflies dancing, and swerving to some

rhythm long forgotten, I am astonished with all my

Surroundings."

With Love and Regards,

Maria Rotondaro,

Good verse, My applause, My vote

There are butterflies dancing, and swerving to some
 rhythm long forgotten. I am astonished with all my
 Surroundings.
The colours so bright, that odour that enhances the air.

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Maria, its amazing how much you miss when your mind is closed to protect against harm, the moment you break down those wall's, escape the past, new light begins to shine , beauty all around, your soul free from chains, dancing inside, singing in joyous song, the road to healing may appear distant, but your legs willingly and excited take the first steps towards happiness and future in a content mind and open heart,
new fresh start, well done, great write, much love nardine Sanderson xoxo