Poem -
What do You Drive
What Do You Drive
I said hey do you drive
?
She said only men wild
!
I said hey babe
.
Let’s go for a ride then
.
But she drove me away
&
Then brushed me aside
,
 Like a flake or a crumb
.
I had nowhere to hide
.
I said, hey babe
,
Let’s take a walk on the..
!
Too late she was gone
.
Oh well
!
It was fun while it lasted
xx
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Neville this is FAB! seriously, it took me to the song by Lou Reed "Walk on the wild side" Such structure and well chosen words, that really set the beat of that song to your piece. This is a clever write my friend. Your pen is mighty as is your mind. This poem should not be overlooked
Thanks for leading me to this piece my good poetÂ
Your friendÂ
Gwen :)Â
am grinning like a Cheshire cat Gwen .. think I've just dislocated my jaw .. thank you so bloomin much .. well its either that or Bell's palsy :) x
lol gosh I wouldn't wish either of those on you dear poet. But you are more than welcome. It is a really good read :)Â
.. am glad you picked up on the Lou Reed thing :)