What Else?
Burdened, stained,
Sunken in sheets,
Lay woeful, hopeful,
Erratic heart beats.
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Star gaze sporadic,
Across open sky,
Dreams I seek,
No matter how high.
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Drowning in tomorrow,
I ponder the past,
Enlaced with sorrow,
Is it meant to last?
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We age, bestowed,
Riddled with pain,
We suffer the squall,
Is there light after rain?
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Tears brimming,
Loved ones I miss,
Is death the beginning?
Do we pass over in bliss?
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Family I miss dearly,
They helped shape the way,
I think of them daily,
I miss them every day.
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Heavily laden,
I collapse under stress,
I weep and wonder,
My life is a mess.
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Will my sins be obscured?
Will I make it in life?
For all I have endured,
I love my life.
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My children, my all,
My wife by my side,
To lose them, Iβll fall,
What a hell of a ride.
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Comments
Brilliant write Simon. I'm almost jealous of the stanzaΒ
I wish I'd thought of it first. "Dreams I seek, no matter how high"
Great words and very relatable.
- SydΒ
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Thank you Syd.Β I love the film Field of dreams and this idea just popped into my head.Β Thank you so much for your lovely comments.
Another outstanding piece, Simon! Love how it develops into something positive, as in gratitude for your loved ones. Excellent in its entirety!
Gosh that's awesomeΒ
Thank you kindly Mandy.
Your work is so relateable. I am drawn to your beautiful voice.
Thank you Lisa you're so kind.