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What I "LOVE"

What I "LOVE"

An early awakening, to relish the sun rise,

The warmth it brings into my heart suppressing cries,

Sharing and chatting over coffee with my adorable sunshine,

Heart filled laughter and lovingly touching, so sublime,

Our openness to each other, no longer false but true,

Her beautiful smile and sense of humour on me grew,

Planning the day ahead, maybe a trip out to the farms,

Or staying at home together with her in my arms.

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When my 6 year beautiful daughter visits for the day,

Spending the time, loving, talking, laughing at play,

Hide and go seek one of her favourite games I find,

Counting while you hide only to hear a giggle from my behind,

Us folding paper in half, filled with colour paint,

Revealing our creations and comparing, maybe a re-paint

Her innocent smile, humour, grin to see if I enjoy the same,

   We are so close, never apart again, forget the shame.

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Hiking through nature, observing the birds and bees,

Admiring the towering trees, swaying in the breeze,

The sun rays glistening through the shadowy foliage,

The smell of the forest, moist with mushroom spoilage,

Rivers sparkling, rapids, cleaning over boulders flowing,

Beautiful shrubberies, bushes, all natural around, growing,

The tranquility and relentless beauty that nature does bring,

Butterflies flapping around, and listening as birds sing.

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Settling down after the days relaxed planned delight,

Reliving the joy of the day as the sun begins to fade from bright,

Celebrating as the moon begins its evening glow,

Star filled sky flickering brighter for their stunning show,

Crickets chirping happy noises as if they see similar,

Moths flying about the light blindly for them familiar,

The evening quietens as the nightfall approaches around,

 The day’s warmth cooling down as the light show begins to astound,

Settling down for bed after a sundowner at the days end,

Peacefully sleeping no disturbances, as one with nature I blend.

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This is what I "LOVE".

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Deborah Evans

HI  Paul....... This was a joy to read i loved it. Beautiful words
about your daughter and nature  ten stars :-)
Great Write..... Debs 

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Bradford

Hey a very beautiful write of love . I can just see you playing hide and seek with your 6 year daughter ,just having lots of fun. I have 9 year old boy who loves playing outside and explore like I did when I was kid . Loved the write . Cheers rock 

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Mark Paul van d...

Cool Bananas Rock - Yeah my daughter loves playing, also out side but winter has started this side now.

Thanks for comments. - When is the next erotic write from your side? LOL

Mark Paul

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Larry Ran

Hi Mark Paul,

I just read your beautiful poem, a lovely dichotomy of a man's love for his wife and daughter.  It is beautifully inundated with alliteration and onomatopoeia, so deftly employed to illustrate your depths of passion.  I could feel myself out in Mother Nature, inhaling all the beauties that you portrayed.  Phenominal write.  I wish I could give you ten stars!

Peace and Love,

xox Larry 

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Mark Paul van d...

Hi Larry

Thank you so much for your kind words - I'm what you call a nature freak - Have a great day.

Mark Paul

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Jai Masters

What a tour de force; the meaning 

and the perfect rhyme; 

i am a lucky reader!! 

A child is born! 

Luv & light Jai:) 

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Mark Paul van d...

Good evening from my side, Cherie

Most definitely my daughter and nature are one to me, she loves walks in the mountain with me.

I do thank you for your kind comments.

Have a special day there.

Kind regards,

Mark Paul

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Tony Taylor

Hey MARK PAUL!!........ Lovely!!......... truly!!.............. sweet perfection!!............ BEAUTIFULLY delivered!!.......... when she grows up.......... and you read this together..........THAT..........will be an amazing day for you both!!............smokin' grooves brother poet!!............. Love to you and yours!!.......... smiles..........T xo

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Mark Paul van d...

Hey Tony - Thanks a Mil man. .... As usual I appreciate your input and valuable comments.

My daughter is huge in my life................. Just the amount of time that is an issue.

Mark Paul

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