WHEN NO ONE'S AROUND

Tonight I'm alone
Been taking stock, my mind on you
Since I punched in, eyes on the clock
Standing in aisles with a broken heart Packing out freight and reading these charts
Can't fool them much longer, their on to me
Looking busy pushing carts and pushing thirty, it's Friday
I'm working on who I am when no one’s around
But stay a little longer now, don't let me down
I'm just a man subdued by your charms
Like a boy when I'm in your arms
We need a relief, this town offers little
I take that hour drive, meet you in the middle
There's an old bar on Brighton Ave. that still stands
Where the losers tell you all their schemes and plans
I'll take you there
I'm working on who I am when no one’s around
But stay little girl, don't let me down
I'm just a man seduced by your charms
Like a child when I'm in your arms
As the dreamers sang an off key tune
My best lines persuade you to my room
Repenting our sins and masking the gloom
All that getting ready just to take it off
All them games you play just to get me uh
Making promises under warm covers
Talking about hard times and past lovers
I'm working on who I am when no one’s around
But stay little girl, don't let me down
I'm just a man seduced by your charms
Like a child when I'm in your arms
We don't wanna get older, yet we wouldn't go back
We dance for the man it's all just an act
They say not many dreams come true at best
The world needs farmers but baby that's for the rest
I'm taking my chances and betting on a guess
No matter if you're prayer is of fear or belief
Don't change the fact you're my relief, so stay awhile
I'm working on who I am when no one’s around
But stay with me girl, don't let me down
I'm just a man seduced by your charms…
I'm just a recluse in your arms

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Comments
I love this!
Maddison
Thank you. I wrote this on an over night shift working for Walmart not for a contest. I hope that comes across stronger than putting together something for a win. Also, I wont win because I won once before not very true to "the best". The "new" wins all the time not always the best on here. As long as fans like it I'm ok with that.
Anthony Mendez,
I love the below lines, My applause, My vote, Recommended
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
Thanks for the vote, but who ever voted a 3 star please send me an example of a 5 star, love to see it
Until this time ( since 4 days back ), I have never ever given 5 stars for any authors, for you info. Henec, I do not have an example !
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI
And you are?
"do me a favor, don't do me a favor." vote on that quote will.
Congrats on your winning nomination dear Anthony Mendez
WILLIAMSJI MAVELI