Poem -
When time is needed
the air of silence
causes me so much pain
making my heart break
tears fall
the untold truths held in
make my chest heave with hurt
causing me to rage
I feel sad
memories built on feelings
that wont heal
wrecks my love for you
I cannot lie
I wish
I want
I need
time to heal
a chance to forgive you and me
I need space
fly away hurt
come back joy
tears roll
for you help me to heal
tomorrow I await you
hearts will collect
sadness
minds will cause feelings to multiply
actions can bring about change
today hurts
come back fantasy
rearrange reality
friendship needs love
love needs understanding
yesterday is gone
love me
hurt me
one day I will cherish myself
I will heal
Comments
Incredible imagery and format.
You weaved a love story that was full of sadness and emptyness then, at the end found clousure. That is how I read the poem, good job with creating lasting images in the poem.
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thank you very much , I think you got the poem spot on
evrod