Poem -
When Two Hearts Are Of One Mind
What's the use in writing,
When you can't explain the void.
What's the use of trying,
When it can't be told in words.
You know I know your feelings,
And I know that you know mine.
So what's the use of writing,
When two hearts are of one mind.
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Comments
That would be my goal! all minds one with the Savior! I know you mean it to be soulmates, I believe the way to achieve that is both focused on the Savior. thus one with each other. nice write Shaun!....Jim
Jim many thanks and wise words I totally agree with .
Thanks again good sir and I wish you well my friend.
Hi Shaun. I think this is the shortest poem I've read of yours!! I was utterly surprised! I really like this. Its short and to the point. Less is more and this is a whole lot more in these two verses. Clever little unique write on love and soulmate. Brilliant my friend!! Hope u are well!! Px
Pratibha many thanks and how right you are, for I did write more and deleted two stanza's that just dragged it and lost the message a tad.
Glad you enjoyed it and I wish you and your family the best things this life can bestow.
Awwww what a poem Shaun, seems like you have captured the beauty of this quote perfectly in your write! I really enjoyed this one, my friend. Hope to catch up more on your work soon! Kind regards, Max
Max thanks man for your superb and always warmly welcomed comments my friend.
And take your time there's no rush and I'll have some quality time off to catch up on your poetry.
Thanks again and I wish you well.
Oh I long to find a love like that... soulmates ... does it exist? I thought it did but I was brutally mistaken. Glad you found this kind if love ⚘x
Tina many thanks for your comments and yes is the answer and she is truly worth it.
And never lose hope for things change in love and life, usually when one least expects it and for the better.
Thanks for taking the time to read and respect to you my poetry friend.
Greg thank you for liking and also pinning sir and I am more than happy you liked reading it.
I thank you again and respect to you sir.