Poem -
Where Good Intentions Lay
Most good intentions are resting on the petals of a sunflower
wrestling against the autumn wind and straining to find the sun.
Slowly slipping from their golden platform and meandering on a
gentle thermal ,finding rest on the dry bracken ground,
only to then slowly decay within the roughness of the soil,
and then be forever buried
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Comments
Love the picture you have created where sometimes all the best intentions are somehow, lost and forgotten..but hopefully many more will be remembered and valued. This is a lovely piece of work Lodi, succinct, descriptive and a thoroughly entertaining read.
Thanks so much StevieC always love to get your comments. Lodigiana xx
Very beautiful description of a sad truth ??
You are so right Marion, thank you so very much. Lodigiana xx
Lady L this is so beautifully told it reminds me of Kahlil Gilbran. Sad but beautiful.
Great write my friend,
Nigel.
Thanks so much my friend..really pleased you like it Nigel. Sometimes I am inclined to ramble on a bit but this felt short and complete enough in just a few lines - which for me is a bit of a miracle! Lady L xx