Poem -

Where You Stand

Where You Stand

I'm here at this point and
you'll finally see,
the pain that you caused me
It's yours now,
                     " I'm free "
Parts of the pieces
   watch where you stand
I tried to hold them, but
they slipped from my hands
Walk thru the rooms slowly
one step at a time
I did it often, " lonely night
                       after night"
Parts of the pieces
     watch where you stand
I tried to hold them, but
they slipped from my hands
You'll  walk the path on the
same worn out floors
and hear my cries echos
from a heart that
                       you tore
Parts of the pieces are
where you stand
I tried to hold them, but 
they slipped thru my hands
You lost a diamond, a
love meant for you
alone is your omen
.      " despair"
                   is yours too
Parts of the pieces
   are where you stand
     painful the memories
               now do you
                       understand?,,,,,,

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Gwendoline

Hello Teresa,
This is a great write. I love the rhythmic feeling throughout. This is, I feel accentuated by the format of your wording. The repeating lines throughout the stanza, enforce that fluidity beautifully, whilst emphasising the weight of the pain endured from this heartbreaking experience. It is always terribley traumatic a feeling, when that one person betrays our heart. We can only hope they learn and feel the pain from the repercussions of their actions. Which I felt was expressed within this fine write 

Thanks for sharing
Welcome to Cosmo
All the best :)
Gwen x 

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Teresa Swigert-...

Thank you for your kind words, and I had hoped that anyone who read it would feel 
the depth of her pain. Thank you.

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