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Whether you are here or not

Whether you are here or not

Whether you are here or not
The sun still shines, from time to time
Whether you are here or not
The winds are blowing, the rivers flowing
Whether you are here or not
The tides are changing, the clouds rearranging
Whether you are here or not
Kids are playing and lovers laying
Whether you are here or not
The world keeps turning, the fires burning
Whether you are here or not
The bells are ringing, the birds are singing
Whether you are here or not
Couples still smile while they walk down the aisle
Whether you are here or not
I'm in the loop between fame and shame
Whether you are here or not
Everything is equal, but it's not the same

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tempemendivil

Ā  Ā Hello Dario; I really loved reading this... You got a really great hook here throughout your write, and by the time I got to the last four lines, it was very strong, it had me smiling actually. My favorite lines are the last four lines

"Whether you are here or not
I'm in the loop between fame and shame
Whether you are here or not
Everything is equal, but it's not the same" those are good lines, wanted to let know that added this to my favorites, very well done man, take good care:

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Dario Fabijanac

Hi man,
I'm glad I made you smiling. The poem is actually easy and breezy. And yes, everything is pretty much the same with or without her. It's just much better when she's here :)

Take care man!

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Cleo Tomi Olajide

Hi Dario, lovely lines, a good reminder to life regardless of whatever comes our way. Great job. Warm regards.

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