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While I Sit and Think.

While I sit and think, my head starts to sink. When I open my eyes, I have to face my cries.The clouds are fuzzing, and my body's buzzing. I don't hear a sound, but the rain still pounds. The trees are in mourning, as I see the warning. I am all alone,but the strong wind still moans. My mind is straying, but my heart is staying. I'm burning bright and hot, and feel heavy like a rock. This deep depression, I must make a confession. It's hard to control, in this big black hole. I feel like I'm fading, with my heart slowly breaking. No-one seems to understand, unless you experience first hand. How tired and heavy, I feel so deadly. My mind is racing, while my feet are pacing. My tablets are helping, I am no longer yelping. With help and love around, my feet stay on the ground. I look up and I see, the bright tunnel ahead of me. My depression is subsiding, I can come out of hiding. While I sit and rethink, my head no longer sinks. When I open my eyes, I have overcome my cries.

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Tony Taylor

Very deep dive into depressions dark and slippery slope......... at least that's what I'm getting here....... some VERY powerful phrasing .........I Like the way you wrapped the whole thing in "RETHINKING"......... the ending woke beautifully........ALL STARS!!....... and ......WELĈOME to COSMO!!.......LOVE and ROCKETS!!!.......T xo.  ?✳✴☀

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