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WHILE MY GUITAR PLAYS THE BLUES

WHILE MY GUITAR PLAYS THE BLUES

I SIT HERE
ON THE 
BEACH 
WATCHING
THE SUNSET 
I START TO 
PLAY MY GUITAR 
                             CHORUS
WHILE MY GUITAR 
PLAYS THE BLUES
I GENTLY WEEP 
OVER YOU 

THE SUN HAS SET 
AND THE MOON 
IS BRIGHT THE 
DRUMS BEAGIN
BEAT A BONFIRE 
BURNS ON AS
SIT HERE PLAYING 
MY GUITAR  
                         CHORUS 
WHILE MY GUITAR 
PLAYS THE BLUES
I GENTLY WEEP
OVER YOU 

MIDNIGHT HAS COME 
THE DRUMS ARE
BEATING AND THE FIRE
IS RAGING I SIT
HERE PLAY MY GUITAR
                                   CHORUS
WHILE MY GUITAR 
PLAYS THE BLUES 
I GENTLY WEEP
OVER YOU 

AND HAS SUNRISE 
I SEE YOU WALING 
ON THE BEACH 
AND RUN TO YOU 
HUG AND KISS YOU 
WE WALK OFF IN TO
THE SUNRISE 

          

 

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Gwendoline

Gosh I can relate to using the guitar as a means to channel that emotion. It sounded so serene in this beautiful write 👏✨🌻

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Gwendoline this is an old write 
going back to 2017 in Cosmo I just wanted to bring it forward and updated so I didn’t get lost Thank you for reading

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Gwendoline

Am glad you did that, as I got to read it :) 

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Marion

Wow Greg!! You are just getting better and better...you really are. Loved this one ❤️

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Jill Tait

Awww u got me singin the blues Greg u ol rocker u ❤️💕❤️⭐️

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Greg Etsell

Thank you Jill this is a old song that I wrote back in 2017 I thought I bring it forward and rewrite it a different way 

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Jill Tait

Its lovely & can well imagine an equally lovely tune for it ❤️💕❤️

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Being Me

This has a beautiful charm about it. It is gentle, and gentle is lovely ⚘x

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RG

Very soothing and relaxing , perfect way to start a day off by enjoying this write . 

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The fish of the sea

Beautiful. Just more than a simple poem. Bloody fantastic Greg. You should be so proud of your talent.

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Greg Etsell

Thank you so much fish 
I never thought about being proud of my work or proud of myself  just trying to get better at writing which is very hard to do 
thank you very much fish

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John Loopstra

Hi, Greg, I'd seen this one earlier on, but the week was too short to do all the work I had to and wanted to do. Cosmo has become my Sunday church and you prove again why. Love the atmosphere 

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