Poem -
Whispers
*Werewolf Challenge*
Come nowt still woods in fear,
Tranquility ne'er golden here.
When bane moon be full,
Bemoan ye neon pull
Whispers o' feralΒ beast,
On mortal, sinew feast.
Ne'er nigh harvestΒ moon,
Harken famished croon.
Bones foreboded crack
Echoes pitch-shadow black.
Safe-harbor nary spun,
Relished chase please run.
Glut on sanguine gore,
'Twixt keen taloned score.
Beastly nature succumbs,
Savor dire heart strums.
Gleans βneath grisly grin,
Revel wicked carnage sin
Gory disemboweled thrill
Bloodlust frenzied kill.
Heed no ado amber eyes
Be it just sizing prize
Proceed afore, if ye dare,
Ravenously I await there.
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Bravo Lisa, excellent as always
thank you, Simon. a problem I have is, once I've saved it I reread it and find something else to change....do you have any idea how many times I edit it and change it before I am somewhat happy with it?? it seems too numerous to mention lol
Same here lol even after I have published it I read it over and over again and if I ever have an off day if there's not much response I feel a bit deflated but then I pick myself up and start again.
I know what you mean...
" CARELESS WHISPERS " like careless talk, in the war, of the last century, best known, can cost you dear. You, have to realize where threat lies, to your investments, in life, or, something like it. In the end, you must discover ways of communication, satisfactory to all " breeds " ! The " CREED " you represent giving full vent to aspirations of improving oneself, away from corruption i.e influence of the wrong types. Probably, beyond " hybrid fixations " ! Within, your world, rather than one imposed on your psychological motivations, against will ! You exude " latent energies " to fulfill potential. IN EVERY WAY POSSIBLE. Most likely. Every " thing " contemplated ?
DELIVERY, OF PASSION....to effect, the way of " things " !!Β X X
Thank you Richard for stopping byΒ
Cracking write Lisa...thoroughly enjoyed!! ...off to read Jill's now...just saw Simon's...really enjoying these challenges ???
Thanks Marion..... The challenges really help me get into a groove. I haven't written this much in years lol
Ok...it was a choice between wind and weeds...IV been out on a walk..lol...lots written on the wind so my challenge is 'weeds'...???
lol now we have two challenges. Jill challenged Tweedledee and Tweedledum so it is gonna be a challenge to be sure of
Excellent word choices and rhyme technique.Β
Good work!Β
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? thank you