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Why

Why

Christian’s mingle on the science channel
Holding tight to their belief
Have faith they say, we can show you the way
And make your life complete

Confused
Human nature
Wanting
Something more
Questioning
Our existence
Creating
Religious war

Bigoted towards each other
Hiding behind ancient scripture
Treating people with contempt
I think you get the picture

Confused
Am I
Wondering
Is it a lie
Waiting
Till I die
For the answer
As to why

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Jason Lee

Denise this is class, just my cup of tea lol, very thought provoking 5*s and a Nom from me :)

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Denise Kinney

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thank you for your support!

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Jonathan Carter

Very well said.  I absolutely love the way you structured the poem :)

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Surabhi Saxena

Heyy Denise..:) Its reallyy A fab piece..Perfectlyyy written..I really liked it..:) Keep writing
Love
Surabhi

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Denise Kinney

Thank you so much.  It's really encouraging to get such positive feedback.  I really appreciate you taking time to read my work.

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