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sparrowsong

Hello pine_god...

Some people can deal with sadness and all that 24/7...

Some need at least an hour of comedy everyday...

Some cringe at the sound of news and then there's those who just subject themselves to anything...

Great write!

Thank you for sharing...

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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KIERAN1369

To sum up all that in just three lines is truly amazing
Well done and well written

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smoke

i really loved this! it shows how you don't need much to give a powerful statement! job well done, especially since you so young! you've got talent.

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POETIC

this was really well done, you put so much in just 3 short lines, not many people can do that! great write, deserves to win

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STAR

this is really good, you put such a raw and true statement into such a small amount of words, no wonder its a nomination this is just some great work! talented

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