Poem -

Why Not Just Call it a Day

for when enough is enough ..

                                                                        At the end of a very long day
                                                         if you still think, you are calling the shots
                                               let’s do each other a favour and just call it a day, full stop ..

 

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Shaun Cronick

Hello Nev and hope all is well and dandy with you and family.
And please don't call it a day, especially when it comes to writing poems.
For your writing gives each a voice for the voiceless and a lasting true echo.
For... Echoes Don't Tell Lies.
Well done to you my friend your 10th poetry book on Amazon and today now ordered.
And with 200 poems on display, you are a poetry juggernaut and well done again good sir!
All good things to you Nev :)

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Neville

Hello and good morning my friend .. Well what can I say except another massive thank you .. Not only for visiting this little scribble but for your ongoing support.

I am not too bad, just getting older and beginning to think more and  more about taking it easy .. My granddaughter is trying to crawl and becoming more and more vocal, she has just turned 6 months and is just like her mum was .. a very fussy and very messy finger feeder ..

News is not so good regarding our niece but she has been into school since her second brain tumour was removed and we continue to keep our fingers crossed for a miracle .. 

I expect you have been busy yourself .. I hope work is now bearable and that you can look forward to a decent break with those you love maybe in the summer .. 

I am so grateful to you for getting that 10th book Shaun, I am quite sure you must be the only person who has a copy of each one .. 

As well as my own thanks, I also thank you on behalf of all those whom your generosity will undoubtedly help in some way .. 

I shall be in touch but in the meantime, take care, stay safe and keep ya chin up ..

All the very best of All Good Things, 

Neville 
 

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Being Me

Hi Neville, it's difficult when someone is calling all the shots. It makes you feel helpless. Usually, the people who are calling the shots are the ones who really and truly shouldn't be. Hope you are okay xx

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Neville

You are absolutely write Tina .. and yes, I am fine my friend ta .. xx

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Jim "The Lad" ....

if only! let's call this a hit! cool write Nev!.....................................................Jim

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Neville

That is very kind of you sir Jim .. I'll take it .. thank you mate & good to see you .. Neville 

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