Poem -

wild suns

What becomes us
our faces like old maps 
Lined

with journeys that took us
Nowheres
and somewheres
To junctions and corners to
mansions
and old sheds
Have we not run
with fine winds and
Oft times been led

By wild suns

but still, here we are
Back where they said
ragged and ice burned
Wise yet so silently dead

M ~

 

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Marion

Hey B... thanks for your kindness... hugs X

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Jac Tales

Age doesn't Matter. Unless You Are a Cheese. Great Write. 🙂

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Marion

😆😆😆😆 thankyou lol x

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Wilford Barker

Thank you for the reflections Marion.

Have a safe and wonderful weekend.

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Marion

Thankyou Wilford... so sorry for late rey x

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Being Me

Such extraordinary talent you have. Your magic ink never fails to draw me in to your poetry. This poem is truly exquisite. It is direct and tough, like old weather worn skin and yet, at the same time it is as vulnerable as a brand new baby. There is both defiance and sadness here. Some truly brilliant lines and an ending that grabs and doesn't let go. I love this poem. Here's a bucket 🪣   and here's some stars 🌟 (one of many)   to fill it with xx

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Marion

Tina... thankyou... a beautiful comment and you are so very very kind X

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Marion

Thanks love sorry for late reply x

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Larry Ran

Dear Lady Marion,

This is a most depth-filled work, as we all quest for sunrises, but oft times they become sunsets.  Yet, we persevere.

Peace and love,
Larry xxx

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Marion

Thanks so much Larry ..sorry for late reply x

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John Loopstra

Aye, too often one finds that after all wanderings, still in the centre of the heart there are hurts that came along or lured you back to where you started from. Love the Wild Suns... 

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Marion

Thanks so much John.. sorry fir late rey x

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