I appreciate formality (or at least form...in the poetic sense!) as much as the next man...but I think it's time you stop calling me 'Mr Brown'!!
My name is Jason...or J, if you prefer.
"Mr. Brown" makes me sound like a middle-aged bank manager from Croydon who wears three-piece suits on his days off and has a model train set in his basement...along with the bodies of several missing prostitutes!!
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Heartrendingly beautiful.
A line as exquisitely wrought as it is simply true.
Wonderful!
J ;)
Thank you Mr Brown
I appreciate formality (or at least form...in the poetic sense!) as much as the next man...but I think it's time you stop calling me 'Mr Brown'!!
My name is Jason...or J, if you prefer.
"Mr. Brown" makes me sound like a middle-aged bank manager from Croydon who wears three-piece suits on his days off and has a model train set in his basement...along with the bodies of several missing prostitutes!!
Again...wonderful poem.
J ;)
Cool Jason....you got me smiling....thx man
very sad indeed, Lorris, your poetry will help to heal you, thanks for sharing this friend, hugs
Awesome write!
XX Lisa
Thank you Lisa
Thx