Poem - 17 January 2018, 05:38

Contest Nominees

Wish

If a wish was of a friend,
I’d ask it kindly,
Fill my lungs,
Both dark and bright.
And let it then teach my breath to speak in color,
For all my neighbors live in far a land.

Like 1 Pin it 0

Support CosmoFunnel.com

You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal.

Views:

1075

Rating:

Tags:

Color Humanity Wish

Poetry Genre:

Drama Freestyle

Topic:

Listed in:

Contest Entries

1 comment

Log in to leave a comment.

Comments

Tony Taylor17 January 2018, 17:25

Hey SIR GAUNA!!......this is a VERY concisely structured piece of poetic succinctness!!.......impressive......."....to speak in color..."....... Great shot to the chops!!...... love your instincts!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo

Reply

Votes

Tony Taylor1007 years ago

Likes

Tony Taylor 7 years ago

more from Jose Gauna

Poem - 20 Jan 2018

Fear

Never does my heart beat so violently
It nearly breaks free from its prison,
As when my mind...

430

Poem - 16 Jan 2018

A Tale Untold

If a happy ending is what you’re after, it’s none exciting here;
For even the happiest of ending,...

498

Poem - 15 Jan 2018

Goodbye

The sun had not yet peeked its face through the bedroom window
When you had already gone.
No...

593

2

Latest poems in Drama, Freestyle

Poem - 15 Jul 2025

untitled(7-15-25)

I notice
life's fleeting moments
beware of
the heat surgeance
careful to see...

7

Poem - 15 Jul 2025

Highs,Lows(7-8-25)

in spirit
in flesh
in mind
in primal
it all has its
extremes
good...

9

Poem - 15 Jul 2025

Alpha/Omega(7-8-25)

never would i thought
but it was coming
only god knows when
till then
fighting...

9

Advertise on CosmoFunnel.com