Poem - 17 January 2018, 05:38

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Wish

If a wish was of a friend,
I’d ask it kindly,
Fill my lungs,
Both dark and bright.
And let it then teach my breath to speak in color,
For all my neighbors live in far a land.

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Tony Taylor17 January 2018, 17:25

Hey SIR GAUNA!!......this is a VERY concisely structured piece of poetic succinctness!!.......impressive......."....to speak in color..."....... Great shot to the chops!!...... love your instincts!!......ALL STARS!!..... well done!!......LOVE & ROCKETS!!.......T xo

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