Hey LARRY!!...... another PERFECTLY delivered Haiku!!.......5-7-5......I don't like it when writers try to change the parameters of the true Haiku rhyme scheme........I too wander those catacombs on a daily basis ~ so for me ...this piece hit home powerfully....... well conceived & beautifully delivered brother!!.........ALL STARS....... fantastic word choices........ high fives........T xo
I need one of your hilarious poems to makeĀ both you and meĀ smile.Ā Just as you say I am clever at Haikus, you are brilliant with your humorous ones, that have a way of tickling my funny bones.
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Cool dark Haiku Larry. Catacombs of pain say it all. Love and peace.
Hi Devon,
Glad you liked it.Ā Thanks for the nice comment.
Peace and Love,
xox Larry
Hey LARRY!!...... another PERFECTLY delivered Haiku!!.......5-7-5......I don't like it when writers try to change the parameters of the true Haiku rhyme scheme........I too wander those catacombs on a daily basis ~ so for me ...this piece hit home powerfully....... well conceived & beautifully delivered brother!!.........ALL STARS....... fantastic word choices........ high fives........T xo
Hi My Poetic Brother,
I always feel honored when you gift me with your gracious words.Ā I too, am a schtickler for the true 5-7-5 Haiku verse form.Ā Thank you again.
Peace, Love and Rockets,
xox Larry
I love this one my Larry as it says so much for me today and the way I`m feeling too. You are so clever at these Haiku`s my darling.
I love you too
G xx
Hi Dear G,
I need one of your hilarious poems to makeĀ both you and meĀ smile.Ā Just as you say I am clever at Haikus, you are brilliant with your humorous ones, that have a way of tickling my funny bones.
I love you,
Larry