words
At times, I feel so uninspired,
having no words to share with anybody
yes, I know they are moving deep inside
living in the light of sweet innocence
feeding on stored up laughter
childish conversations,
memories of safe places;
demanding nothing presence
still breathing, but scattered, and
afraid to come to the surface of reality
perhaps, sensing they have no place, anymore
appearing only once in a while
random, like a quiet child
suddenly verbose
then filling up every fiber of my being
with energy, confidence;
at least, for a little season
igniting by emotions,
when thoughts are formed from
the blessings of God
the contentment after a good meal
the purity of pleasure; without guilt
the silence of a faithful contented lover
the musings of a beautiful woman;
fanning their embers to flames;
yet, even that is temporal
and vanishes when the skin cools,
the magic of friendship,
love without perversion;
love indeed;
wanting nothing needing nothing...
but I digress; it is the absence
of words I try to speak of, and
the elements that give them life
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You certainly have found the words here ! To produce a magnificent poem !
Inventive write ! Thoroughly enjoyed !
Best wishes to you ! :)
thanks Richard, glad you enjoyed...
:) Certainly did !
All the best to you !
Hey Mamma Jamma!!...... you know I Love you bro!!..... but I'm just not buyin' this one man....... its like you and I need to pump some life into this site bro........ lets kick some ass..... and tell t how it really is brother!!.......... no what I'm sayin'?.....if you don't........ too bad........ I'm flyin' into the truth about poetry...... and there ain't no mo holdin' back bro!!.......... peace........T xo
T, you're the best, bro....thanks for commenting pal, love this comment....I hear what you're saying, to be honest, I don't even know if I like this one myself, I know it comes from a 'core' truth, but I'm a realist as well; not everything I write will connect or even be liked by everyone, all the time; that would be creepy; and not possible... even an egomaniac like me can't be that messed up to believe otherwise; I think the whole concept of posting should be to get constructive feedback, but that's me speaking....T, all I want are honest comments pal; let's fly into the truth, I'm willing, so don't you ever hold back, with me....as for the site, it will be whatever the people on it need it to be....personally, I just want to read poetry and stories, and post some as well, not looking for too much else....lol, so this is the 'new' Tony Taylor? liking it, but I like you and know where you are coming from, please say anything you want as a comment....peace, hugz
Christopher, I think this is a very good write man. As im reading this I was thinking you are literally speaking from the heart gapping into a different potential source of inspiration to fuel this write. No poem is ever bad it justs speaks to certain readers in different ways. This is the stuff I like to read, well done. Always a friend D.
Christopher, I can relate to the notion of "having no words to share with anybody." There have been dark times in my life where I am unable to write creatively. And have tried, but not been very happy with the results! Well crafted poem!
thank you so much, Susan....great comment, in appreciation
Mind blowing ... Great words... Love it!
suddenly verbose
then filling up every fiber of my being
with energy and confidence,
at least, for a little season
ignited by emotions,
thoughts formed from
the blessings of God
the contentment after a good meal
the purity of pleasure; without guilt
the silence of a faithful lover
the musings of a beautiful woman;
fanning their embers yet
Favorite part
Thank you, Keshia for great comment, so glad to hear that you enjoyed...cheers
Hello Christopher...
I have experienced the same as you put very creatively here...
Thankyou for sharing...
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Hello Sparrowsong, thank you for commenting, I appreciate very much....yes I do believe that one should appreciate when words come together from nothing but inspiration and experiences, as I get older I have become more appreciative when it happens, take it less for granted....cheers Sparrowsong, have great Sunday. I'm heading to the Portuguese bakery for some coffee and sweets...
Hello Christopher...
Sounds delicious...
Please have some for me...
Happy Sunday to you my friend...
Cheers!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Chris, you are astoundingly gifted and I love your work. hurry up and publish your poetry!
wow, thanks a lot for saying that Lisa, you're more than kind, hugs my friend