A World Of Problems

Devils wait
With cruel temptation
Around us around us
And after the sin
Depression within
Grows like an illness
Shrouds the love
Hell is a state of being
A self imposed suffering
Hating ourselves
Crying in death
Why Lord?
Why Lord?
Must my last question
Be met with silence
At gates of understandIng
I am a graveyard
I weep in an eternal grave
For there is no light just a sanguine flame of hate
Warm putrid flesh decays
And where is the soul?
Won't you rise from your hole
My loving friend
Save me from my self made tomb of mortal chains
Before it's to late
Before I lose hold
Of that which is gold
To me
To me
Days nights the feeling seems to grow
And my cold wake continues on
Like an endless sadness crying at a funeral
How did he die?
He was such a nice fellow
Unfortunately the face betrays the pain
The lips move uttering two word lies
I'm fine
I'm ok
Don't worry
About me
It's not cool to be depressed
Now I'm repressed
And who can blame us
When we blame ourselves
For the problems of a world
Are yours and mine
A poem by
Liam Herdman
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Great write Liamo- we get depressed about depressive things and carry that weight but no lee-way for us ...
Tina x
Thanks Tina
I was quite fortunate
I was depressed and the topic was perfectly in tune with my inner mood.
It flowed like tears
Thanks:)
Yours
Liamo
Flowed well liamo .... best writes are written-no good keeping them in for the devil to get :)
Tina x
Congrats on your winning nomination, I love to read again, the below lines
Regards & Love
WILLIAMSJI
Thank you my friend glad you enjoyed my rendering
Cheers yours Liamo