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Worst poem ever'( Greg's challenge) second attempt...how hard can it be??????

He who falls 
Shall always rise again
Except dead people.

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Marion

Lol...I'm  off to read yours ....??

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Greg Etsell

Know what it is is it we all try to write a perfect poem It’s Hard to a bad You are doing well

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Marion

Laughing out loud Greg...does that mean im doing well at being a bad poet or doing good at writing crap? I'm confused...lol oh lol...can't wait to see what Mathew and Jill up with ???

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Greg Etsell

You did well in this poem so did 
Jill 

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Jill Tait

Teehee wasn’t easy Greg haha xx

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Greg Etsell

That’s why I did the challenge it’s easy to write a great poem but is hard to write a bad one and make it sound bad and not make any sense
I am not good at it

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Jill Tait

I get it totally & an excellent challenge my friend ❤️?❤️

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Marion

Laughing out loud Greg....does that mean I'm doing well at being a bad poet or doing good at writing crap? I'm confused...lol oh lol... can't wait to see what Mathew and Jill come up with???

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Greg Etsell

Marion You are a great writer this is only an fun we’re supposed to have fun here so don’t take it too seriously you are a great writer this is only for fun

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Marion

I'm not taking it seriously you donkey...look at the first line
'laughing out loud' it's banter Greg...banter ???

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Marion

IV loved this challenge Greg, IV laughed my head off...and your polar bear joke on Mathews poem had me weeing myself lol...?

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Greg Etsell

Marion I’m glad I’m glad you like my little joke when I heard it I thought it was funny they were other jokes I heard but I can’t remember them

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Marion

Oh god Greg please please share...lol...

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A Lonely Journey

LOL!!(Losing Our Lunch), 
Marionette, that was brilliant! Of course, Zombies may not like it, but who the heck are they to question your wisdom!! 
I once fell on some meal, and never arose. 

LOVED IT!! 

Matthew. 

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A Lonely Journey

Marionette! 
Where is your first attempt?(and this doesn't mean that I can't tell your bad ones from your good ones!! LOL!), but I couldn't find it. 

M. 

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Marion

Lol...it's underneath this one on my page...put your glasses on...Jill's third attempt is brilliant ...where is yours???

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A Lonely Journey

OK, I'll check it out! 
Let me just put my eyes back into my sockets. 
Mine is coming! I was writing it when a cessna landed on my leg and crushed my clavicle there. I've casted my body, but am still looking for my luggage. 
It's coming!! LOL. 

M. 

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Marion

Can't Wait!!  ?

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Marion

It's Inderneath this one right there in my page...lol...

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