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HAIKU

HAIKU

My life is worthless 

Please stop trying to save me

It will destroy you 

© 2014 Valerie Lynn. All rights reserved.

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Yasmeen Bano

Dear friend,  "You are really a sensualist as per my opinion. Kindly excuse me if my words does not vibrate

your soul."

With regard.

Yasmeen Bano

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Valerie Lynn

Hi Yasmeen - I have no clue what your comment means. Can you please explain to me what you mean by what you wrote?

Thanks!

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Yasmeen Bano

Dear friend,

It is not difficult to understand my philosophy for a highly sensitive poetess like you. Every worthless part of  woman's life is similar to that lotus flower is existed in filthy water of the pound till period she does not get her suitable consort. No sooner than true lover comes close nimbly they adopt very essence enough to make them immortal.

Ysmeen Bano

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Carey Milton

Hiya Val :)  

Love this write...impact plus!  Big vote from me hun well done xx

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Valerie Lynn

Carey - Thank you so very much for reading and for your vote! I wrote this in like 2 minutes. I wasn't really expecting anyone to read it or get any stars haha so thank you!

Val ♥

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Valerie Lynn,

Highly meaningful  write, Thanks and My applause 

My life is worthless 

Please stop trying to save me

It will destroy you 

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Valerie Lynn

WILLIAMSJI - Thank you for your kind words! I always love your comments!

Val ♥

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Congrats on your winning nomination

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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Susan O'Reilly

went through a bad stage years ago where i began to think that people who got hurt that came anywhere near me great write which i really related to congrats x

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Valerie Lynn

Thank you so much Susan! I'm sorry to hear you went through a time feeling that way. I sure hope you don't feel that way anymore. You are such an amazing person with an awesome talent and I truly admire you!

Val ♥

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WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

Dear Valerie Lynn,

Awaiting to know your latest info and situation, also looking ahead to read your beautiful poems,

Regards & Love

WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

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