Wounds of Empty Time
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emptiness suffocates
erased spirit
within sadistic walls
where
it makes
no difference anyway
it makes
no difference anywhere
it takes no
distance anywhere
to no
where
where a full moon’s
primal light
floods the mind
with searing rain
with drops of helplessness
with helpless moments
of immutable pain
where rain fills
a private void
where
a lost seeker
stumbles in fog
contemplates savage loss
of light
in time’s bog
in time’s wounds
crushed by
cold rain
wounded light
cold light
wounded rain
cold night
wounded souls
-NJV (1982/1983--rev. 2022/2024)
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Comments
Wow, soulful write ✍️
Nice work!
Thank you, JP! This was derived from some poems I wrote decades ago (reflecting painful emotions experienced back then & still experience)--but it's become practically a new poem.
It's fabulous ...really ...but I didn't say you could write about me lol 😂...only joking
hate to say though your words hit a nerve x
Thank you, Marion!
Very poetic :)
Thanks, K.G. It's one of my more heartful poems.
FYI--being a perfectionist, I just revised it somewhat again.
Hey NJV,
Welcome and honestly I am the same. I've had to learn restraint over my perfectionism, otherwise I would never get anything done.