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Writing an original song 🎼

Writing an original song 🎼

I am starting to write an original song

But it sounds similar to ‘Dr Hook’s- A little bit more’, so I scrunch up my song sheet and toss it in a litter bin that is on the floor

Ah well I start once more and all over again, as I hum another tune from amidst my brain

“Dee dee da, tra la la” yup this sounds unique, as I sing it to myself ten times but I am my worst critique

Now there is nobody else around to give me some advice, though I don’t like singing to anyone else coz my voice isn’t nice

And I cannot play a musical instrument, huh not even a guitar, so there’s no need to worry about my new song coz it will not go far

But I enjoy making new songs up this is what I like to do, Oh if only I sounded something like Adelle then I could sing them to you...

 

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Pratibha Savani

Sing....write your heart out Jill...! Great write. Px💜

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Jill Tait

Teehee well I do but I’m rubbish 🤣💕❤️💕

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Jill Tait

🤣🎼laladeedah 😱🤣💕💙💕

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Jill Tait

Aww Thanks Greg luv so much 💕💙💕

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Jim "The Lad" ....

I promise some of your writings will be songs! I have the same trial I can;t carry a tune, but I think someday some of my words will inspire a musician to create a song, yours are already melodic! great write! ..............................lad

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Jill Tait

Awwww Oh my God I soo thats my dying wish Jim my lad 💕🙏💕

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