Poem -

written in the stars

written in the stars

Last night your face was drawn in the stars.

Each and every line was drawn to perfection.

I tried to reach out with my lips,

but you were to far.

I wanted to give you a kiss.

But then you faded like smoke from a cigar.

Now you are all that I miss.

So tonight,

I hope to see your face in the stars,

and this time, I will blow you a kiss,

and I won't miss,

because you won't be to far,

and you will blow my way,

as if you were smoke from a cigar.

And together we will be written in the stars

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Tony Taylor

Hi Renee, I really like this......(glad you're not mad at me)........lovely imagery here.........great job with timing and rhythm too..........well done.........strong write my friend..........smiles..........T    xx

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Renee Monroe

Thank you :) I enjoy your comments lol (and I can never get mad at advise)

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