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Yellow Paint

Yellow Paint

He painted her portrait like Van Gogh,
Some Post Impressionist mess, 

He used shades of purple and blue, just like the bruises on her thighs,
And perhaps black to shade the hearts of those who turned blind eyes.

She was a bit a of a Surrealist painting too,
Bent and broken,
Arms, lips, and skin taken out of skew.

Layered like oil paints,
Thin and bleeding like watercolours,
And the shades of acrylic,
one fake smile layered over another.

With brush in hand he shaped her form,
Background and foreground, 
The delicate mosaic all up her arms.
White washed or cover coat,
To hide blemishes, of her beauty he would gloat,

But she was just a treasure not treasured,
She was to be his ardor,
but not to be adored,

Pretty. Placid. Along the wall was she to hang,
The world to view her beauty, but never see her pain. 

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Byd0nz

Fantastic write Victoria. Every line held my attention, I think this is

 something special, best wishes.

Cheers Byd0nz

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Deborah Evans

Hi Victoria I  agree with BydOnz this is 
a Great write the analogy of abuse to painting 
is so clever.So well written
Welcome to Cosmo and will look forward to reading
more of your work 
Best wishes Debs 

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VictoriaHillary_

Thanks for the review!!! I look forward to getting to know everyone on Cosmo. 

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Christopher Correia

this is lovely, VictoriaHillary, quality layered work you produced here, with great artistic integrity at the core; I noticed you didn't go for the obvious rhyme on second and third lines; 'mess' = thighs and not chest, respect....unique ambitious tone in your style, please keep posting, would love to read more from you....tribute 

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