Poem - 05 December 2018, 13:22 Death of goodbye Ella death is strong pulling you by leaving discomfort and ashes lie Views: 1348 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Abandoned Anger Burden Sad Poetry Genre: Drama Lyric Song Verse Topic: Struggles in life Listed in: Contest Entries 10 comments
charlotte05 December 2018, 13:35 so very expressive . i love your choice of words for example the use of the word '' shattering '' '' a million pieces ''Â really speaks of just how painful this is ... i love the flow of this one Reply
charlotte05 December 2018, 13:40 sorry to hear ... its not nice to get so much pain in ones life i can relate in a way Reply
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so very expressive . i love your choice of words for example the use of the word '' shattering '' '' a million pieces ''Â really speaks of just how painful this is ...
i love the flow of this one
thank you. story of my life!
sorry to hear ... its not nice to get so much pain in ones life
i can relate in a way
Aw!! thanks. hope it goes well for u
So so beautifully expressed and delivered🌺I love it
thanks!! Life can be a challenging but we work through it!
Well written. I am sure many can relate to your poem :)
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thanks!!
Heart wrenching honesty. Well delivered.
thanks!