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charlotte

so very expressive . i love your choice of words for example the use of the word '' shattering '' '' a million pieces ''  really speaks of just how painful this is ...

i love the flow of this one

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Ella

thank you. story of my life!

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charlotte

sorry to hear ... its not nice to get so much pain in ones life

i can relate in a way

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Ella

Aw!! thanks. hope it goes well for u

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Silent Dreamer

So so beautifully expressed and delivered🌺I love it

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Ella

thanks!! Life can be a challenging but we work through it!

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poetryfan

Well written. I am sure many can relate to your poem :)
 

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Ian William

Heart wrenching honesty. Well delivered.

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