Poem - 12 November 2015, 10:37 You are gone Melissa Caron Though I know; You are gone I hope for you, during each break of dawn I had enteredĀ a contest for a 15 worded poem about missing someone dearly. Let me know what you think!! Sincerely Melissa <3Ā Like 0 Pin it 0 Support CosmoFunnel.com You can help support the upkeep of CosmoFunnel.com via PayPal. Views: 1083 Rating: Total votes: 4 Tags: Abandoned Lonley Poetry Genre: Melodrama 10 comments
Tony Taylor12 November 2015, 13:46 It's lovely sweet poetess!!......with only 15 words ~ I'd say there's not one wasted word........love the image Melissa!!..............smiles............T xo Reply
sparrowsong12 November 2015, 16:12 Hello Melissa... I think it's Great! LOTS OF LUCK! Hope you win your prize! Hugs... sparrowsong Reply
Devon La Porte12 November 2015, 18:29 Hi Mellisa it certainly has the power to provoke the readers mind into thinking she looks for this person every waking day, well done best of luck. Reply
Bradford12 November 2015, 18:54 Hi Melissa short and to the point . Great write Ā cheers Ā :)hrl Reply
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It's lovely sweet poetess!!......with only 15 words ~ I'd say there's not one wasted word........love the image Melissa!!..............smiles............T xo
Thank you Tony!!
Hello Melissa...
I think it's Great!
LOTS OF LUCK!
Hope you win your prize!
Hugs...
sparrowsong
Thank you Sparrow Song!
Hi Mellisa it certainly has the power to provoke the readers mind into thinking she looks for this person every waking day, well done best of luck.
Thank You Devon! Cheers :)
Perfect, good luck beautiful girl ā¤
Thank You Nardine :)
Hi Melissa short and to the point . Great write Ā cheers Ā :)hrl
Thank you :) cheers friend