YOU ARE MY SYMPHONY!

I feel your presence
In the lyrical, warm and
Spacious bass that reverberates
With the sweet highs of violins
Accompanied by the vibrant
And smooth flavor of the trumpet.
The clarinet introduces a
Clear, deep alto flow that makes
My skin tingle in anticipation as
You lick your lips like the saxophone
Player licks his reed moistening it,
Front and back then holding it
Against his tongue making it wet
Preparing to evoke a sultry, sexy
Disturbance of need and desire.
Your eyes read me like sheet music!
The G-clef placed on the upper stave
So your fingers will play fluidly,
And nimbly across piano keys
Inviting hot mellow whispers
With overtones of soft vibrations
And single noted screams of passion.
The timpani’s percussion announces
Your purposeful intentions
To conduct a masterpiece;
A composition of unique brilliance
To bring to a climax the final
Rhythmical beat of the metronome’s
Cadence within walls that willÂ
Soon collapse in quivering surrender.
A climax of such lustful composition
Rocking into stormy utterances of heated
Delirium in a moment of multi-movement
Which culminates in the ultimate thematic
Resolution of the exquisite drama of lovemaking.
The finale… a rhapsodic satiation!
Darling, you are my symphony!
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Loved the play on the theme and the play on your words!!  Tastefully erotic once again Val, loved the last line! HAPPY NEW YEAR :)
Rachel…Thanks Rachel!  Happy New Year to you and yours!
val
Chris…thank you!  I love jazz, grew up with it in my home..my dad played the bass and trumpet and had two bands…he also sang. I played the clarinet and sax in school.  I am always looking for new approaches to write about anything that interests me although I've always written about love and romance.  Music is a sensual venue for me…especially jazz…especially the sax.  I belong to several poetry sites because I need the feedback to improve my writing.  I very rarely receive more than a cursory comment.  I appreciate the depth of your critique and commentary.
val
brilliant congrats x
Hey Girlfriend! Â Thanks!
this is wonderfully sexy
Hi Jess…thanks so much!  I'm glad that you found it sexy because that sure is what I was aiming for!!!
val