Poem -
You Can Beat The Vampires!.
You fill me up with your education
And show the way to dance with the day
Your pleasant and peculiar ways
Can speak through screams of vanity
And I like the way you see the world;
Full of angels and vampires sitting down;
Playing chess at an outdoor cafe
With everybody singing the words
Of your favourite rock and roll love anthem
Like a surreal dream repeating;
You're the question, and the answer
That hardened Darwin's cynical cock
With delight I stir, just wanting more
Give me just one ticket
To your coke and popcorn supernova
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Virtual hug for you my sis. Now Chris is trying here to be poetic; whatever that means...okay different and a bit abstract, tinkering with a different kind of style for him on a poetry site, and low and behold I get no comments; so he's thinking; was it something I said? lol. Did I suddenly step on toes; did it suck so bad? To be honest I like this one the most out of the three; so I was confused....until an 'angel' of encouragement rendered a comment, and a positive one at that, well bless your heart (sorry about the bad word) now I can sleep soundly; kidding I always sleep soundly....Cherie, all kidding aside thank you for your words.....cheers, hope you're having a good evening
P.S it was inspired by a really good friend; I was being a little cheeky with the Darwin reference; I saw a documentary on Darwin; more religious than he gets credit for....surprised me
Haha, oh my Chris you are simply brilliant and purely amazing with your words, my brotherly and poetic friend. Yeah you are pretty spot on through out the entire thing, as well. I do have a habit of mixing the darkness within the light and vice-versa. I love the creativity you added to this it is purely genius. Yet, you say you want to stop thinking during the writing process of your poetry. Chris... please do me a favor and never change your technique or your approach. Your poems are amazing. There is not one so far that I have not enjoyed for you. It is your over thinking I believe that makes your poetry the coolest of all. A ticket is being sent your way friend, the super nova is flying through the air..... strarting....... now!!! :P I absolutely love this. pure intelligence with a twist of vivid imagination, I love how you added a comical twist as well. I
I feel completely honored to be the inspiration of this poem. You are absolutely great, your turn is coming up soon!! Cheers man!! xox :)
Sincerely,
Melissa <3
OMG! Melissa, you inspired this? Lol, Kidding....I'm so relieved you liked it; one always runs a risk when they say to someone that they inspired something; let's just say you should be darn sure they're going to like what they inspired, or it will be very awkward....lol, good luck trying to do one about me by the way, I'm weird and boring, def. not inspiring....glad you like it my delightful friend, keep being yourself; and lighting up the world with your words
I like immensely..... good write
Evrod, I so appreciate your extraordinary kindness towards me....cheers philosopher king