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YOU DON'T OWN ME

YOU DON'T OWN ME

Don't tell me what to do, don't tell me what to say,
because you don't own me any more, my baby;
do you really feel answerable to someone else?
Pulling your strings - there's nothing that you can do.

I won't have it, I want my freedom, right NOW,
it's been so long, they called it compatibility,
tolerance, love, compassion, what do you call it?
Where did all that time go, it went like a ghost.

Maybe that's it, you are a ghost of your former self;
remember your old ways, didn't really used ro care,
now you no longer have the time to stand and stare,
you were coerced into something with no knowledge.

One minute you say life is great, then next it's not,
you don't own me - is that just something you forgot?
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RG

Such conviction with strong emotions of self-respect , nothing more freeing than having the courage to defend yourself and stand up for your independence. Great poem . ~RobĀ 

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Terry Reeves

Hi Robert,
Thanks so much,
love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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Terry Reeves

Hi Tony,
Thanks so much,
love,
Terry.
PS.
How's your romance?!
xoxo ;)

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Tony Taylor

Hey TERRY.....thanx so much for asking......It has a kind of sparkle to it that I have NEVER before experienced......the kind of stuff one only finds in storybook romance.....she is so much like myself in SO many ways that it has become somewhat frightening to us both and makes us smile deeply at one another whenever we speak!!......I hope that gives you some kind of idea brother!!.....Peace n Stuff!!.....be well & hello to the wife!!
PS. Cool Sonnet dear poet brother!!

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Terry Reeves

Hi Tony,
That all sounds great.
Something else - could you read my wife's poem -
'NOT MINE.,' and comment please.
Thanks,
Terry.

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Terry Reeves

Hi Simon,
Thanks so much,
love,
Terry.
xoxo :)

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