I like the image you create in your first two lines, the first line being open to many an interpretation. But it is the last line that grips the reader despite the title sort of leading the reader down that path. I also like the presentation of loneliness when surrounded by others and noises, echoing the loneliness that can be felt when in a crowd.
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I like the image you create in your first two lines, the first line being open to many an interpretation. But it is the last line that grips the reader despite the title sort of leading the reader down that path. I also like the presentation of loneliness when surrounded by others and noises, echoing the loneliness that can be felt when in a crowd.
Thank so much!
Yvw.