You Will Be Back
Once upon a moment
Love was my opponentÂ
My passion was as potent
As my lover was poisonous
Opening my heart was as dangerous
As it was treacherous
Being in love, after being used
Emotionally and mentally abused
I had closed my soul and refused
To give love another chance
Broken by your romance
I chose not to dance
With the flames of disaster
For breaking my heart, I crown you the master
Of my pain, I never did matter
To you, you loved her
You chose what you prefer
Which was to love her
But I must say
You will be back one day
Wishing to stay
With me
Because one day you will see
No one could ever love you as much as me
Maybe though, that day
I will look at you and say
Please go away
You broke my heart once before
So before you do so even more
For you I close the door
To my heart
Though I loved you from the start
Loving you is what tore me apart
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Comments
Wow Melissa!!........I hope this is a fictional write...........because I thought I read a few poems back that things were going well with you...........sorry for being a snoopy nose...........this is just sad..........and your face was made for smiling.......I liked the way you used three line stanza's for this.........it helped the impact of the final line..............HUGZ!!.............T xo
Hi Tony, lol yes it is a fictional write for the present but a factual write for the past. Also I do not mind you being a snoopy nose, I can be the same way reading your poems. So no worries! Glad you enjoyed my poem.... Hugs xo
Melissa this is remarkable in many ways....hey first off you rhyme really well, not just 'very well' but f...ng great, it is your 'gift' and I don't like using that word 'gift' too often, but honestly you are amazing at it....rhyming supports your work so gracefully, enhancing the cadence; your words dance like a stage production, the tone may be 'dark' or breezy or angry, but I can dive in and appreciate the construction alone that so beautifully compliment the words, but you have the words also...no one else writes like you; I believe that is the highest compliment you can pay a talented poet...spot on tone, narrative expressive and three dimensional....holy smokes Melissa, you are a darn good poet, writing electric poems....looks good on you bud!
Hey Chris, wow you just almost made my head explode there with all those amazing compliments, thank you! I am in the process of going into all of my old poems and re-editing (wish me luck) lol. But really you just made me feel bulletproof there friend. Thank you :)
Honorable Poetess Melissa Caron,
Great write, thanks for sharing, my love, my applause, my vote, I love the below lines,
Sometimes love does not have the most honorable beginnings, and the endings, the endings will break you in half. It’s everything in between we live for. It is always a human common sense of beginnings and endings in between a lifetime , loving someone is what tore us apart and to depart, never depart.
Love & hugs
Willy
Hi Willy! That is so true as well when you say it is everything in between that we live for. And no I am not planning on a depart either :)