Poem -
Young death
The disease is taking course on my innocent body
it gives me such pain
Why does people's face become such rain? When I'm the one in pain?
I don't want pity
I'll tell you I'm stronger than you think.
The doctors want to kill me with their treatments. My daddy tells me I'm been vain.
They say 'your too young to be ill' so funny weren't they the ones who took my truth for vain?
I'm so tired now so so tired
It's been such a long journey
Daddy I think I can go now with my heart filled with sweet memories
So let go now...
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Comments
Wow Britany!!.....if this is coming from a place of truth......then you and I have MUCH in common.......I too am tired of the pity in the eyes of those who ALLOW to visit me..........powerful stuff girlfriend.........and if this IS true...........then I am sorry for your Lot in this life.........but........it is through adversity that the biggest lessons in life are learned..........I pray that fortune smiles upon you.........and that your mind takes you GREAT places..........but.......I have no pity left to offer you...........very insightful write.........and I Love you for this Bravery you've put on display here this day..........glide on my friend...........smiles........TÂ xx
Tony I'm nearly tearing up thank you for such words thank you thank you. I pray God bless you with good fortune and health my friend... huge smiles :-)
Thank you Flower girl? Gosh your words gonna make me cry. Blessings my friend!
Thank you Barry for your sweet and moving comment!!!! Huge smiles! I realised something, the people who love you the most gotta let go so you can go on your journey alone.
Wow this is extremely powerful! I can definitely relate to it...I am so tired of being sick and tired. You wrote out all the emotions perfectly. Excellent write...the feelings of letting go...I know all too well. Keep writing!! Hugs to you!
Val ♥
Thanks Valerie truly appreciate it. Smiles :-)