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Young Then Old.

I am an old man looking in.
To a young man looking out.
Stop look smell think.
At him i shout.
Absorb life's surroundings where you live.
Where credit and help is due you should give.
Do never think you’re the best.
For in reality you’re just the same as the rest.
Treat the way you want to be treated.
Cheat not, because for sure you would not like to be cheated.
We humans are an unpredictable species.
We even pollute our rivers seas and oceans with our own faeces.
That says a lot about our unpredictable actions.
For some war greed killing is their top attractions.
I am an old man looking in.
To a young man looking out.
Knowing the young man will be longer about.
Hoping i can steer him away from life’s eternal human trait called sin.

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The fish of the sea

Powerful poetry, made stronger by the interwoven rhyme. Peace to you mate, hope all is well!

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