Your Memories

I'm really tired of making you mine..
I have no words...
I just want to get drunk...
With sips of wine...!
Your being soo quite..
Your responding soo white..
I feel a lot for you
But for you its simply a dark night...!
My dreams are painted with colours of your life..
I'm trying to forget that love..
But those were painted for you...
And quite difficult to rub..!
I know this madness will lead to nothing...
Just hatred in my mind...
And pain in my heart...
But I do will change...
As the time is changing...!
Your lovely embrace...
My stupid talks..My blinking eyes..
You will miss them forever..
When I'll be a high price...!
This will be a final decision of my..
Not to learn you in my lonely thoughts...
And never make you my path...
Where ever I walk...!
But whatever happens..
I'll always wish you to shine..
As you were truely mine..
And will be mine..!!
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Surabhi Saxena,
" Your lovely embrace...
My stupid talks..My blinking eyes..
You will miss them forever..
When I'll be a high price...! "
Your poem is very simple to read and understand. This is one of the qualities of a good author. And you deserve that title. A simple poem is one where the emotion has found its thought and the thought found the words, like an embrace of two in real life. Your above lines prove that. Good write. Keep writing more and read more old poems as well. This is only a suggestion and not an advice. Good Luck and Happy New Year 2014.
Regards
Williamsji Maveli
Thank you Soo Much Sir..!
your suggestions and advices do mean a lot to me..
Regards
Surabhi
nice one..great expresions and thoughts!
liked it..
Hey Sista..:)
thanks a lott :) m happy u liked it..!
Love
Surabhi
Heyy Angel..!
I am Happy that you loved the lines..yeah..dreams are often painted or made with colourful memories..for our loved ones..with whom we are connected by heart..and so was mine..:)
Thanks a lott for ur lovely comment really appreciate it..!
Love
Surabhi