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Your Second Chance Story

Your Second Chance Story

I want to rewrite your story
About a boy who made it to the top of the mountain
With a smile on his face and a dream in his heart
No demons, No shadows, No flame throwing darkness
Full of yeses, You can's, and Successes...Not heartless
Life made simple, Life made happy, Life made purple and hand clappy
You looked destiny in the eye and decided to fly
No cries.....Not shy...A phenom you were....are.....were
Shall Always be
Journey complete.....Fini....No defeat
Only love

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Tony Taylor

This is SO clever LIZ!!...... this HAS to be intended as a lyric line of some sort....... it is SO sing-songy (and I mean that in the BEST sense of the expression)...... It actually reads like a VERY well conceived song!!......TRULY impressive write my friend!!......ALL STARS!!.......LOVE & ROCKETS!!......I am your cyber-friend and admirer.......tony ?✴?✴?❀

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Liz Campbell

Thank u so much! This made my day.....seriously. Your words are so well thought out and mean so much.

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