Youthful Blind Spots

High above the crowd getting a bird's eye view
Not doing what I see all of the others do
As your reading this poem just know I'm not judging you
I'm just expressing what I see and speaking the youthful truth
Following the rules while others are breaking them
So badly you want to shake and awaking them
It may seem cool in your world but in reality it is wrong
Not learning the education objectives but the lyrics to a song
Why, because it rhymes and makes you feel good?
Honestly where is that going to get you in your adulthood?
Most of you if not all were introduced to a religion
but later put it aside to make your own decisions
The sky feels disrespected, you all are just rude
throwing dreams in the air and they're not being pursued
You might be physically strong but your mentally weak
temptation's on mountain and you climb to the peak
Hurting each other instead of lending a helping hand
Falling for coast love, washed away in the sand
A lot of little things that are later big actions
Your future over everything, the most important fraction
If you ever wondered why the youth is under minded
Open your eyes and look around, if you had to you were blinded

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Comments
I really like this poem
Whats up Morris,
Morris still waiting to here something from a couple of friends down in Miami Florida, so as soon as i know you will know, keep the faith...
Sincerely,
Jim
Hello Cindy,
Just as Morris stated, this is a very beautiful poem and the rhymes were spot on time...introduction to the real life expectations of the real world and what to expect from it a true education from a teacher at hand, the the superiority of the body cant compensate for the duties the mind must
carry out. Very well delivered and placed out there for all to acquire knowledge from and through. The power in your pen has lent for (free), an illustrated guide line, to those that are in need of your teachings and those that are in need of a refresher course....You rocked this one...great job...I really felt this poem.
Sincerely,
Jim
Thanks to you both. Much love and I appreciate it a lot.
Thanks. I appreciate it!! :)