Fates Cruel Comfort
Her eyes paralyzed me
Her beauty saturates beyond skin deep. Her aura drenches me in the eye of her storm
The weight of my vulnerability magnetized the endless stare
I swam through her pain and danced with her honesty
Shes raw, real,and radiant
My soul reaches to hold her, fix her, love her
Only to shatter before her
I cannot reach her
She's lost shes broken she's scarred and scared but pure
She is everything missing in me
I need to know her
I swear I aready do better than I know myself
Im trembling
Im in shock
A warm calm comfort blankets me momentarily lifting me into enlightenment
In that moment I believed in fate, in love, in the possibility of being complete
I will never forget her
She will be the one I hold on to
My serenity, my hope, my comfort, my fantasy,
I have found my soulmate
Not my future wife or lover
For fairytales do not come true
In a world fueled by suffering
She fills my soul and there she will stay forever
She is the inspiration cushioning my reality
She completes me
Remaining distant but so close
Always finding me when I am lost
Then she fades, leaving her imprint, reminding me that we are plagued by bad timing
Just puzzle pieces in fates cruel comfort
I want more
But refuse to let go of this uncomfortable comfort
Comments
Nice work beautiful, had me at the word cruel, love everything about this
well done xoxo love to you nardine xoxo
A fantastic story based on love folded at the wrong time, written in first person and with an everyday language that permeates the story's credibility, says the author:
“En un mundo que se alimenta de sufrimiento ella llena mi alma y allí se queda para siempre dándome serenidad. Ella es la inspiración que amortigua todo lo negativo de mi realidad. Ella me completa, queda distante… pero al mismo tiempo… tan cerca. Ella siempre me encuentra cuando estoy perdido, luego desaparece y su velada huella me explica que estamos plegados mal en los paquetes del tiempo, que tan sólo somos dos piezas de un rompecabezas que dispone a su comodidad el cruel destino. Quiero más, quiero más, pero ella se niega a desprenderse de esta comodidad incómoda”
An impressive account of something that affects us all, the relativity of time.