Story -

the fight against hell

preface

Far away in the city of Ava, a baby was born. Her name was Rozelle. During birth, her mother died unexpectedly. It was extremely painful to Rozelle knowing her mother had died. Everyone laughed at her and called her names like the motherless child. They kept teasing Rozelle; “Rozelle Rozelle with the mother that couldn’t tell if she was a squirrel or a girl”the school students shouted. Rozelle ran inside the school. With every step tears poured out of her gorgeous sapphire eyes she hid under a desk in an attempt to shield her ears from the hurtful words. Sadly Rozelle’s attempt was in vain her heart was pounding like an African drum and her eyes let out pools of tears as she heard the kids yelling that her mother didn’t want her. She tried to imagine that she was in a mythical place far from Ava,far from her sorrow. She was awaken from this fantasy by a loud noise and an aching pain she located the injured area and found a  little blood. Rozelle looked down beside herself and found a rock. Rozelle ducked as rocks started flying passed her head,barely missing her scarlet hair.one night Rozelle woke up from a bad dream. In the nightmare the kids from school were right and her mother didn’t love her.  She was so stressed out, that as soon as it was light out, she snuck into the kitchen and grabbed a knife. She slowly slid the knife into her abdomen. A second later she was out cold lying on the floor with a bloody blade in her stomach as blood spewed out everywhere. Her last words were written in a note on the kitchen counter. The note read,

Dear Dad,

    I am sorry you had to see me like this, but I am just so sick and tired of being bullied at school. I know you tried to help me,but it was so hard.They hit the last straw today at lunch when they told me no one loved me. I’m sorry!

                                 love,your little angel, Rozelle

Rozelle's father fell to the ground and wept.

“No! No!” Rozelle's father said as he held the lifeless corpse of his beloved daughter.

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mark thomas

You have talent !!! AND ONLY 14... you should keep going...You will be a famous author if you stick with it...which you should 

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roze maria

thanks but i don't think i can continue that was written for a certain someone but he cheated on me with my best friend and now I'm just ugh i don't think i can continue with my works we were dating for a year and three months i know some people think its stupid but i really only wrote for him

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roze maria

are there any other fourteen year olds on here 

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Tony Taylor

I understand!! ~ just something you had to get out!.......but Mark is right.....you do have a gift for words.......this is well conceived and well delivered............if you decide to stick around..........WELCOME to COSMO!!..............well done.............T xo

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roze maria

yeah he wasn't worth it he cheated on me twice but yet i choose to ignore the signs i will keep writing for you guys because now that i know people like my works I'm going to continue

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Lucas Lazar

I agree completely with all opinions and despite a few years of the author of this realistic story, Roze Maria is a great autor.

The story describes a bloody reality committed by minors in a complete impunity and that leaves its victims completely defenseless against that system based on insults, harassment, humiliation and assault by a group of mindless against some of their prey.

In Spain in recent years have fallen many child victims of any harassment without that to date no law has been modified, minors must be protected from physical form as well as their rights, but should also respect the norms and fulfil its obligations outside and inside the home, and a minor offenders harassing another child should fall on the full weight of the law of the courts of the child bullying does not leave a number of casualties as high as violence against women, but juvenile stalkers also end up killing their victims, or as in the case of Rozzelle, induce them to depression and suicide.

The stalkers as happens to psychopaths lack empathy and emotions, so it's nothing serves cry or ask for clemency, best before a group of stalkers is denouncing, or catch them one to one and let them know the following:

"Not mind me going to jail or the Madhouse, but if you cross my path I'm going to make with your heart a snap for new year's Eve"

When respect is not conspicuous by education there getting buff with fear, and not often never fails.

A greeting.

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sparrowsong

Hello Roze...

Thank you for sharing this...

I must say...

I couldn't have asked for anything more...

When you asked...

Who is ready

I AM!

Hope you keep writing!

Hugs...

sparrowsong

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roze maria

thanks i will post the chapter now

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