from men to gods
Shadow piercer is a very old sword at it's core is a beast created by the gods
It was made to guard the gates of heavenΒ
It could smell the darkness in a persons sole
It could see there sins
Yet everyone has darkness within them some great some smallΒ
The beast did not see the differenceΒ
All darkness was equal in it's eyesΒ
1,000s of screams filled the air the night it came down to earthΒ
The gods tried but could not stop there own creationΒ
Yet out of the shadows came a light
A young warrior xu yin
He was pure of heart and sole
He took on the beast fighting him for 3 days and 3 nights
It was a stalemate the warrior had only one optionΒ
So in the end he gave his life trapping both
Him and the beast in his sword
We're they continue to fight till the end of timeΒ
Never dieing never restingΒ
Locked in eternal combatΒ
In my opinion a God is one who looks after us all
Keeping us safe even at the cost of his life
Xu yin once a man now a GodΒ
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Just a minor critique, you have in your works some misspelled words. but otherwise a very enjoyable read.
XX Lisa