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IS NASHVILLE WRONG? New review

I am constantly submitting lyrics to Nashville for review. Here are the comments I received for the following song what do you think?

Lyrics:

SPIT AND GLUE

Got a T-top 86', running on a little TLC and she's falling apart
Got another Gal, means the world to me, running close to my heart
Getting older feeling the pains, ain't gonna be just another to complainĀ 
Lucky to have you for whatever it is I go through
Been holding it together, with a little spit and glue

Spit and glue, spit and glue
Baby the worlds come apartĀ 
Been holding her together with a little spit and glue

Family is gone, values are dead
Been swimming with the sharks in my head
Storm came in, blew this whole F'ing place apart
Carnival rides in the water, folks looking for a new start
But we'll ride them as we hold our breath, just takes two

Spit and glue, spit and glue
Honey the parts are broken
Been riding it out, thanks to
Some good old spit and glue

Review:Ā 

"Spit and Glue": The title of this song sounds gross. The image that comes to mind is someone spitting into glue or something. It might sound silly but the images a song/title can muster are important. Just looking at the title makes me now want to hear this song. Once you start to see the lyric the title makes sense and isn't so bad however its the initial title that turns you off. Maybe " wing and a prayer" could work or another saying hat means the same thing.Ā 

Nashville

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Jai Masters

Anthony there's alot right about theseĀ 

lyrics; first the title is great! It is evocativeĀ 

I bet this song would work with theĀ 

right country singer and guitar,Ā 

Nashville I hope you're listening!

flowergirl should read thisĀ 

i will alert herĀ 

she has a song published too,Ā 

come back to youĀ 

kind rgsĀ 

Jai

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