POETIC ANALYSIS BY WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

WILLIAMS PEN BY
Author Williamsji Maveli
Poet:
Mildred DJ. Par­­
Poem:
TO A FRIEND, A WHISPERED THANKS
“In the depths of longing
you arrived with gentle hands
soothing the ache of emptiness
filling the spaces with warmth.­­
You bring in calmness to my soul
soothing the building chaos within
quenching the thirst of my heart
reviving the beauty of my being.
Needs that cut deep, sharp as a knife
now smoothed, rounded, and dulled
your generosity almost a river's flow
nourishing the garden of my soul.
My gratitude wells up like morning dew
glistening on petals of my heart
in every breath, a whispered thanks
for the gift of you, the presents you bring.
In your embrace, I find my peace
a sense of home, of being complete
a feeling that echoes through my soul
thanks for filling in my longing,
thanks for making me whole.”
Mildred DJ. Par
ANALYSIS
"To a Friend, a Whispered Thanks" is a  moving poem that captures the essence of gratitude and the transformative power of friendship. The poet's sincere and heartfelt words resonate with readers, inviting them to reflect on the importance of human connection and the positive impact it can have on our lives. The tone is heartfelt and appreciative, conveying a deep sense of gratitude. The mood is one of peace, contentment, and renewal. The poet employs vivid imagery to illustrate the emotional and spiritual impact of the friend's presence. Metaphors like "soothing the ache of emptiness," "quenching the thirst of my heart," and "nourishing the garden of my soul" create a powerful picture of healing and rejuvenation.
The poem is structured in a free-verse format, allowing for flexibility in line length and stanza breaks. This structure mirrors the natural flow of thoughts and emotions, enhancing the intimate and personal nature of the poem. The poem is a heartfelt expression of gratitude to a friend who has provided emotional support and helped the poet overcome challenges. It highlights the importance of human connection and the healing power of friendship. The poet's words convey a deep sense of appreciation for the friend's presence, which has brought peace, completeness, and a renewed sense of self.-Author Williamsji Maveli