POETIC VIEWS BY WILLIAMSJI MAVELI

POETIC VIEWS:
Williamsji Maveli
Poet:
Jayalakshmi
Poem:
FIESTA OF FEELINGS
Unhampered my fragile membrane of meditation,
Fiesta of feelings bustles into the womb of solace.
Turn me a throbbing note of my mother’s solvent prayer.
Fiddling with her lulling lyrics, mend rhyming notes on the cradle strings.
Enchanted to the glaring window sills, rhythmically bewitch with silver sun rays.
Imitating the fervent babbling of sparrows and pigeons, immerse in the flavor of versatile greenery.
Mock with busting beetles, suck the virgin elegance of willows, bluebells, and buttercups.
Ride on tip of rainbows, giggle wide under first showers, drench and drink thrills and tears of realities.
Feelings are invisible magicians,
They mesmerize even in dreams.
But mind, the shepherd of virtues,
Watch them graze in genuine propitious landscapes,
For humanity to thrive in its love-lit pastures.
-Poet Jayalakshmi
ANALYSIS
The poem celebrates the profound influence of feelings on human experience. It suggests that feelings are like invisible magicians, captivating and mesmerizing us even in our dreams. The poet emphasizes the importance of embracing and nurturing our feelings, allowing them to guide us towards a fulfilling life. The "fragile membrane of meditation" and the "womb of solace" create a sense of tranquility and introspection. The "throbbing note of the mother's solvent prayer" and the "lulling lyrics" convey a sense of comfort and security. The imagery of the "glaring window sills," "silver sun rays," "babbling sparrows and pigeons," and "versatile greenery" immerses the reader in a vibrant and natural world. The playful imagery of "busting beetles," "virgin elegance of willows, bluebells, and buttercups," and "riding on tip of rainbows" adds a touch of whimsy and joy.
The poem utilizes several figurative devices to enhance its expressiveness. The central metaphor of feelings as "invisible magicians" is particularly powerful, suggesting their mysterious and enchanting nature. The personification of feelings as "shepherd of virtues" further emphasizes their active role in shaping human experience. The similes comparing feelings to "throbbing notes" and "lulling lyrics" evoke specific sensory experiences. The poem incorporates various sound devices to create a musical and engaging experience. Alliteration is evident in phrases like "fragile membrane" and "busting beetles." Assonance is present in words like "feelings" and "fiesta." The use of rhyme in the opening stanza adds a touch of traditional poetic form.
The overall tone of the poem is one of joy, wonder, and appreciation for the power of feelings. The poet celebrates the beauty and vibrancy of the emotional landscape, encouraging readers to embrace their own feelings with openness and curiosity. "Fiesta of Feelings" is a beautiful and evocative exploration of the human experience. Through its vivid imagery, figurative language, and skillful use of sound devices, the poet invites readers to delve into the depths of their own emotions and appreciate their transformative power. The message of the poem is one of self-discovery, acceptance, and the pursuit of a life filled with love and joy.
-WILLIAMSJI MAVELI